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#1 Law

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Posted 04 July 2018 - 05:19 AM

While filming Gone Missing today, I had an idea that I didn't want to let slip through the cracks, so I spent all day working on it and this is the end result. Pretty good I think, for just a few hours of work. Let me know what you think!

http://movies.tmunde.../watch/guardian

Hope you enjoy, expect more like this, but my main focus is stlll Gone Missing and will be until it's finished!



#2 TehPoptartKid

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Posted 19 August 2018 - 06:21 PM

Cool short dude!

 

Really intense, I love the quality of the shots, and the editing was a nice pace. I sensed doom the entire time, and I knew somebody was gonna die. LOL 

 

Well done!


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Posted 19 August 2018 - 06:34 PM

Thanks TPK! I appreciate the compliments. This idea came to me suddenly while I was filming some new Gone Missing scenes and I just had to put it to film as soon as I could, for spending about 3 hours total (shooting to editing) on it, I think it came out really well.

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Posted 19 August 2018 - 07:59 PM

You're welcome dude. 

 

Keep up the good work. 

 

I would add more sounds. As scary as it is, you need to up the scare, you know what I mean? Perhaps in the next shot, there would be a jump scare. 

 

Just a thought. Well done. 


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Posted 19 August 2018 - 08:06 PM

I see what you're saying, but I wasn't going for a full on horror/jumpstart sort of thing, but a thriller, one shrouded in mystery and uncertainty, to be left up to interpretation rather lead up to some sort of reveal. I do appreciate the feedback and suggestions regardless however.

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Posted 19 August 2018 - 10:02 PM

I hear ya, but even in thrillers, there is a sense of foreboding. 

 

Good luck dude!


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