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#1 DarkSunPictures

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Posted 06 August 2009 - 10:34 PM

The Justice Alliance

Summary
When Platypus City becomes over overrun with villians, it's up to a group of heroes know as The Justice Alliance to save the day. One problem, they suck.

Story
It's just your same old ordinary day in Platypus City, until a group of villians known as The Terror Friends show up. Using their EVIL powers, they steal the parts to build a weather control device. The city only has one group to rely on, The Justice Alliance! But, they can't even seem to stop small crimes. How can they expect to stop The Terror Friends?

Characters

Captain Condom
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Name: Jeffrey Walker
Age: 32 and-a-half
Powers: His bullet proof costume has a variety of gadgets he can use to stop crime, however he has no real powers.
Description: The (unarguable) leader of The Justice Alliance. He is an okay leader, but he can't really execute any of his own plans. He is in great shape, and ready to kick villian ass whenever there is an emergency.

The Procrastinator
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Name: Benjamin Faulker
Age: 42.135
Powers: Super Strength, and the ability to use his weight to make the ground move.
Description: He used to be the leader of The Justice Alliance back when he was in shape. But, after years of procrastination and eating junk food he was moved down from his leader status. He rarely responds to crime scenes, and can usually be found watching TV in Alliance HQ.

Q-Tip
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Name: Daniel Nelson
Age: 34 and 7/8ths
Powers: Can automatically clean anything or anyone he wants.
Description: Daniel Nelson used to be a hot dog vendor, until a horrific incident which granted him his power. He found The Procrastinator and joined The Justice Alliance back in the day.

Jello Man
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Name: Robert Whitfield
Age: 30.00
Powers: Shoots Jello out of his palm, and some other inappropriate places.
Description: Robert was granted with amazing powers when he was standing near a Jello truck and it exploded. He was disinigrated, but the Jello formed around his bones and vital organs before he could die. Over time his entire body, including his bones and organs, transformed to Jello! He decided his life was boring, so joined The Justice Alliance.

The Human Doorstop
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Name: Roy D. Descoteaux
Age: 38
Powers: Can pick any lock or unarm any traps. A black belt in Houquan (Monkey Fist) fighting.
Description: He used to be a National Guard, but felt his skills should be used somewhere else. He found Jello Man, and they both joined The Justice Alliance.

Mr. Unfortunate
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Name: Sherman Fleener
Age: Same number of times he has fallen off a building, 27
Powers: Besides his horrible luck, he can move things with his mind.
Description: Sherman Fleener has some rotten luck. He used to have a good life, but he was cursed by a witch at a high school halloween party. He found out he had powers when he was reading an X-Men comic. He thought it would be cool to move metal like Magneto, but soon learned he could move anything!

Halfwit
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Name: He forgot
Age: He thinks 29...
Powers: He can confuse people just by talking to them.
Description: His powers were gained after he was hit on the head with a golf club. He isn't very bright, so if you ever see him use caution before approaching.

Road Rash
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Name: David Cooper
Age: 23, baby!
Powers: Can run at super speed, but has no direct protection from the resulting friction.
Description: Despite being the youngest, Road Rash is one of the most useful of The Justice Alliance. Although hard-headed, he can do pretty much anything he is asked of.
Due to his limitations of his powers, Jello Man built him special shoes to protect him from the friction of running super fast.




More to come, including a first trailer.

Edited by DarkSunPictures, 08 August 2009 - 03:21 AM.


#2 DarkSunPictures

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Posted 07 August 2009 - 03:13 AM

Off Topic: Hmm... Is there a time limit to when you can edit your posts, or do you have to ask a moderator to do it? I could've sworn it said I could edit my posts earlier.


Here is a picture of Captain Condom, thanks to Jackpumpkinhead and Sanction27 for their awesome superhero modding. I edited some of Sanction's textures to create this dude.
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#3 DarkSunPictures

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Posted 11 August 2009 - 03:52 AM

Here are some screenshots of filming in progress:

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Enter, Captain Condom!
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The Mayor of Platypus City, making a speech about The Justice Alliance.
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The Procrastinator in the Training Room with the Training Robot.
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The Human Doorstop and Halfwit, talking in the car before busting a criminal.
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A new recruit, Decoy Boy, injured during a training fight.
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Road Rash stopping a mugger to impress a chick.
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Q-Tip and Road Rash, ready to move out!
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How unfortunate for Mr. Unfortunate!
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Jello Man, not noticing a knife in his head.

How do ya'll like it so far?

#4 DarkSunPictures

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Posted 05 September 2009 - 06:36 PM

Sorry for not updating in a while. School started, so I might have to put this on hold until I have more free time.

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Posted 10 November 2009 - 04:08 AM

Update: I am now working on this again, since I have found some free time. I am getting the first trailer ready, and soon I will look for voice actors.

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Posted 10 November 2009 - 04:26 AM

Looking quite good. The Jello Man gag is pretty funny. :laugh:

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Posted 11 November 2009 - 10:49 PM

Looking quite good. The Jello Man gag is pretty funny. :laugh:


Thanks man! I was starting to get discouraged with the lack of comments on this. By the way, I watched both parts of Lawn of The Dead and I must say I can't wait for more!

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Posted 11 November 2009 - 11:55 PM

Thanks man! I was starting to get discouraged with the lack of comments on this.


Dont worry about it.
Looking forward to this.
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Posted 12 November 2009 - 12:24 AM

By the way, I watched both parts of Lawn of The Dead and I must say I can't wait for more!


Thank you, and believe me, I'm looking forward to this very much so. Looks like a whole new take on superhero movies that I'm sure anyone would enjoy. :thumbup:

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Posted 12 November 2009 - 12:43 AM

Looking quite good. Can't wait.
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Posted 12 November 2009 - 02:28 AM

Do you need voice-actors for this film? I could be of assistance if you'd like. :001_smile:

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Posted 12 November 2009 - 03:35 AM

I like the way the Mayor looks

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Posted 12 November 2009 - 04:28 AM

Lol, this looks good :) Love the use of mods
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Posted 12 November 2009 - 04:48 AM

Do you need voice-actors for this film? I could be of assistance if you'd like. :001_smile:


Yes I will be needing a ton of voice actors. This movie is going to have a lot of small roles like civilians that make smart-alec comments. But, I will get back to you on the script later. Right now I am still writing the script, and working with the AMM. The movie clocks in at about an hour so far.

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Posted 12 November 2009 - 05:39 AM

The movie clocks in at about an hour so far.


Awesome! Well, you know I'm hooked already and am willing to lend a hand for any voice-acting. Thanks for keeping us posted! :thumbup1:

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Posted 12 November 2009 - 07:26 AM

Looks like my cup of tea! I can't wait to see this. ^^

Keep it up!

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Posted 15 November 2009 - 07:28 AM

Okay guys, the AMM is finished. How should I go about with the script? Do you guys usually give voice actors a full script with scene details, etc. Or do you just give everyone their lines?

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Posted 15 November 2009 - 09:22 AM

You get a better performance when you send the whole script. They can read how the scene flows and how to act, rather than just reading off their lines.
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Posted 15 November 2009 - 03:47 PM

Ok, thanks Uber.

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Posted 17 November 2009 - 04:31 AM

Some images of the Terror Friends!

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Colonel Chaos!
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Skinestro!
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Bucket Head!
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Kaboom Quere!
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Master Darth Bader!


-Also I am currently reworking the script. The original was around 145 pages long, but now I am trying to cut it down a little and make it more similar to the version of the movie made with the AMM.





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